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amaitama, March 24th, 2009, 10:55 pm

Chapter 1 ends! - ...Finally, the end of the first chapter! And it seems that..nothing has really happened. Haha, sorry. But Chapter 2 will certainly be more interesting, I swear!

At any rate, since we're at a good point here...care to tell me what you thought of this as a first chapter? What worked, what didn't, who you liked/hated/etc? I'm going to work hard to make Chapter 2 even better than this one, definitely. :)

And now I go back to enjoying Spring Break and trying not to think of graduation/jobs/sadness D:

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I loved your first chapter but since I'm not a writer or artist don't expect much from me.

Now excuse me, KITTY!!!!!!!!!!!! I love cats...

posted by Game Over on March 24th, 2009, 11:33 pm



 

Aww, Lily and Emma they are cute~ ^^

posted by Kyumu on March 25th, 2009, 12:40 am





 

Eeee she's SO CUTE +w+.
Say yes, Ari, SAY YES.
I think this chapter was great XD the art was consistent and the story flowed really well. I felt it kind of lagged a bit while Ari, Viktor and Sophia were having that conversation, but aside from that it was executed really well. Slow moving is better than rushed imo.

I wished Lily got introduced quicker though =( but i guess that makes us look forward to the next chapter.

posted by xkrazydog on March 25th, 2009, 8:09 am





 

I have round ears...shit

I'm a mortal? This totally ruins my future plans for stuff D:

posted by Chocobosh on March 25th, 2009, 10:12 am





 

XD luckily i have kinda elfy ears (some what....) so im not mortal! lol whatever :/


overland must be the land of the living or something like it amoung mortals. thinking about it its call "overland" going over the border or "crossing over" but thats a theory XD

posted by keoko-dono on March 25th, 2009, 12:24 pm





 

This is so dang cute >///<.
I can't wait for chapter 2...!

posted by Mikashi on March 25th, 2009, 1:38 pm





 

Chapter 1 was awesome. <3 And you're going to make Chpater 2 better? Ohmai. :0

posted by Kaiya-chii on March 26th, 2009, 9:13 pm





 

gasp!!! mortal!!!
unlike me!!! woof!

posted by babbit101 on March 27th, 2009, 4:58 am





 

oh okay

round ears=mortal...

*looks at own ears* kinda pointed...semi-mortal?! O___o

posted by kuroi_hitsuji on March 29th, 2009, 7:34 am





 

wow, way to end the chapter ^_^
wonder what lily and emma's backstories are like ^_~"

posted by AJAngelique on March 31st, 2009, 5:27 pm



 

I think is okay for a first chapter
'cause is describe the main character -and others -

posted by Guest on July 26th, 2009, 1:18 am



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