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amaitama, 24 Mar 2009 10:55 pm

Chapter 1 ends! - ...Finally, the end of the first chapter! And it seems that..nothing has really happened. Haha, sorry. But Chapter 2 will certainly be more interesting, I swear!

At any rate, since we're at a good point here...care to tell me what you thought of this as a first chapter? What worked, what didn't, who you liked/hated/etc? I'm going to work hard to make Chapter 2 even better than this one, definitely. :)

And now I go back to enjoying Spring Break and trying not to think of graduation/jobs/sadness D:

Reader Comments:

	I loved your first chapter but since I'm not a writer or artist don't expect much from me. Now excuse me, KITTY!!!!!!!!!!!! I love cats... posted by Game Over on 24 Mar 2009 11:33 pm
	Aww, Lily and Emma they are cute~ ^^ posted by Kyumu on 25 Mar 2009 12:40 am
	Eeee she's SO CUTE +w+. Say yes, Ari, SAY YES. I think this chapter was great XD the art was consistent and the story flowed really well. I felt it kind of lagged a bit while Ari, Viktor and Sophia were having that conversation, but aside from that it was executed really well. Slow moving is better than rushed imo. I wished Lily got introduced quicker though =( but i guess that makes us look forward to the next chapter. posted by xkrazydog on 25 Mar 2009 08:09 am
	I have round ears...shit I'm a mortal? This totally ruins my future plans for stuff D: posted by Chocobosh on 25 Mar 2009 10:12 am
	XD luckily i have kinda elfy ears (some what....) so im not mortal! lol whatever :/ overland must be the land of the living or something like it amoung mortals. thinking about it its call "overland" going over the border or "crossing over" but thats a theory XD posted by keoko-dono on 25 Mar 2009 12:24 pm
	This is so dang cute >///<. I can't wait for chapter 2...! posted by Mikashi on 25 Mar 2009 01:38 pm
	So adorable, i can't wait to see more. posted by Rindesei on 25 Mar 2009 03:28 pm
	Chapter 1 was awesome. <3 And you're going to make Chpater 2 better? Ohmai. :0 posted by Kaiya-chii on 26 Mar 2009 09:13 pm
	gasp!!! mortal!!! unlike me!!! woof! posted by babbit101 on 27 Mar 2009 04:58 am
	oh okay round ears=mortal... looks at own ears kinda pointed...semi-mortal?! O___o posted by kuroi_hitsuji on 29 Mar 2009 07:34 am
	wow, way to end the chapter ^_^ wonder what lily and emma's backstories are like ^_~" posted by AJAngelique on 31 Mar 2009 05:27 pm
	I think is okay for a first chapter 'cause is describe the main character -and others ♥ - posted by Guest on 26 Jul 2009 01:18 am