O_O;; Uh-oh.

posted by *Suki* on 21 Jul 2008 09:42 am

I love Viktor. It's the sheep horns and his overall personality, but I still love him.

posted by Kids_Can_Fly on 21 Jul 2008 10:36 am

>> should we be worried that "Private" is bolded XD. Oh noez XD.

posted by xkrazydog on 21 Jul 2008 01:22 pm

BUSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by suzmya icigo on 21 Jul 2008 03:52 pm

Why is Viktor so beautiful?

posted by nozmo on 21 Jul 2008 04:30 pm

lol! the look on ari's face when viktor started talking is priceless XD!!!

posted by YumeHamanaka on 21 Jul 2008 09:37 pm

=x Caught red handed. I love Ari's expression in the last panel and Viktor's creepy shadow in the second xDD.

posted by IceyT on 21 Jul 2008 09:47 pm

@*Suki*: Indeed. :D;

@Kids_Can_Fly: I know I shouldn't pick favorites as the creator, but I really like Viktor too. X) I think it has something to do with his constant smile. Or something.

@xkrazydog: Not as worried as Ari should be!

@suzmya icigo: He should have seen it coming, honestly.

@nozmo: Is that a question for the filler? :D Haha oh this is doing nothing to improve Viktor's ego.

@YumeHamanaka: Ari's not one to hide how he feels. XD

@IceyT: I really like how Viktor's shadow came out! Though it kind of freaks me out, to be honest.

jellyB: But you have to admit, those nails get the job done. Er, whatever that job is.

posted by amaitama on 22 Jul 2008 02:26 am

Man, this really feels like manga... I start reading it from right to left every time...

(this reminds me a lot of Shina Dark - you're really talented)

posted by K.K. on 22 Jul 2008 10:29 am

Man, I knew I recognized your art from somewhere. I've come across it many times. XD

Great comic so far! Your style is absolutely lovely and your page layouts are really good, but I think you should put more effort into the backgrounds, even if it's only a webcomic. (It's good for practice XD)

posted by Shamdu on 22 Jul 2008 07:28 pm

@K.K.: Haha, I know your pain...a lot of times I totally get confused at what order to read a comic when I switch between them. And Shina Dark? Haven't heard of it...but now I'm curious, I think I'll check it out. :)

@Shamdu: Haha, oh really? I'm always surprised when people recognize my stuff, it doesn't seem that distinct at times. XD;

But dude, thanks for the critique. I'm actually regarding this comic as more "srs bizness" than my stuff of the past (webcomics are still comics, y'know!), so I'm trying to get my backgrounds in gear...slowly but surely I will conquer them! Which is kind of ironic considering this page doesn't have a background, aha...ha.

posted by amaitama on 22 Jul 2008 08:03 pm

wouha i already love viktor!!his horns are hotty~~~~

posted by chocomog on 24 Jul 2008 11:38 am

lol ARI I SEE WHAT U DID THAR <3 ass grabbing

posted by Guest (Guest) on 18 Sep 2008 11:56 pm

LOL.... Ahahaha... "*sweatdrop*" expresionnn.. XD

posted by kuroi_hitsuji on 10 Oct 2008 01:54 am

look like some body is in trouble!!!!

posted by Katsumi_chan56 on 07 Nov 2008 08:57 pm

I like the way Viktor's tail is subtly wrapping around Ari's leg. It's like he's taking some sort of random extra precaution to keep Ari from just running away.

Though that tail looks rather flimsy, honestly. Wonder if it's ever been stepped on? Even better, what would Viktor do to the person who stepped on it?

posted by The Jester (Guest) on 21 Aug 2009 03:35 pm